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These are all the submissions I get for ScreamPrompts. Check them out; not all the submissions I receive make it to the group's gallery but they are all in this collection. You might find some hidden gems in here!

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my thoughts: Her other one is clutching the skirt of her yellow dress tightly can someone clutch something loosely? if not, then the ad...


stripper stories are great. i bartended at a strip club for six months back when i was a mere slip of a youth and i love reading them h...

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why it's okay to suck at writing:  www.kimcurran.co.uk/2014/05/th…

John Steinbeck on writing:  www.brainpickings.org/index.ph…

People are frickin BRINGING IT this year.  joe-wright and EtchedinDreams are kicking my ass.  Lissomer is someone to watch out for.

day 3 by raspil

Here's my daily trash.

1:  Just Eat It raspil.deviantart.com/art/Just…
2:  The Boxes raspil.deviantart.com/art/The-…
3:  My First Pet raspil.deviantart.com/art/My-F…
4:  The Answer is a Lie raspil.deviantart.com/art/The-…
5:  Harry's Silver Lining raspil.deviantart.com/art/Harr…

And I can see fatigue setting in.  Come on, folks, it's only been six days.

6:  No Rest During Summer Vacation raspil.deviantart.com/art/No-R…
7:  The Good Christian raspil.deviantart.com/art/The-…
8:  JDLR raspil.deviantart.com/art/JDLR…
9:  Hail Mary raspil.deviantart.com/art/Hail…

remember, folks -- adverbs are two things:  a sign of lazy writing and a sign you're not paying attention to what you're doing.  write your first draft with them in if you must to grind it out, then take them out and see how it goes.  nine times out of 10 you won't need the adverb and if you want it, well, who gives a shit what you want. 

And for the love of Christ STOP WRITING SENTENCES IN PARENTHESES!  Nothing makes me stop reading something faster than twats who do this.  it's not clever, it's arrogant noob bullshit!  Find a way to work that thought in, stop being fucking lazy!

it's barely day 10.  did we all blow our loads already?  i'd love to read more from you all but goddamnit I will not read this dreck!  every time you start a story with dialogue, a kitten dies.  i should know.

10:  No Matter What raspil.deviantart.com/art/No-M…
11:  Life on Pause raspil.deviantart.com/art/Life…

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I write Southern Noir.
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Nathaira-From-Hel Featured By Owner Jul 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Hello :) Thank you for the watch ♥
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SMBaird Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Though I'm not involved with the flash fiction month, it's interesting to read what's being written. Judging from flash fiction comments above, I see you're a no-holds-barred, take-no-prisoners kind of writer. And that's great.  Good writing is damned hard work, and it's terrific when little gems pop up through the muck. 
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AngeInk Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks very much for your support. :)
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thanks :frail:
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neurotype Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
a little froofy but, hot damn tinybuddha.com/blog/why-positi…
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raspil Featured By Owner Jul 9, 2014   Writer
foofy isn't always bad.
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true dat
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