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Daily Deviation
September 28, 2013
Communications 101 by `raspil is "simple, yet effective" (suggester's words).
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Suggested by Dr-Vergissmeinnicht
Literature
Foresight
Debra Mae was an astonishingly good programmer.
Her code always worked correctly the first time, and she never missed a deadline. Her workspace was immaculate, but curiously devoid of personal effects. No framed pictures, no toys, just her small collection of pens lined up according to color and an inbox for the occasional old-school paper input.
Her computer was equally immaculate. Nothing extra on her desktop, no stray icons. If one peeked at her browser history there’d be nothing there but work-related google searches and company stuff.
She dressed neatly but very plainly. I suspected she had four dresses in her wardrobe an
Literature
Anxieties of a Conflicted Introvert
I.
[i don’t want to
have to tell you i’m
sorry
again but
lately it’s been tough.
And i’m stricken with this feeling that
maybe i’m not good enough.]
run.
you see, somewhere out there
birds are looking for nests and birds
are finding them in the ribcages of souls but i
am tired of picking straw from my heart
and strings and hair that wrap around my fingers i’m—
[well sometimes i’m a little lonely
but i never wanted to tell you that]
escape.
--tired of seeing the ball i wind from
those leftover nests grow and grow—
[and i want more, want more,
Literature
Beginning We End
Him, in the very beginning:
He is eighteen when he gets his death sentence. Unlike most death sentences, this one isn't going to send him to the guillotine or maybe the noose. Instead, it's handed to him by a doctor with very clean hands in a stark white room probably very similar to the one he'll end up dying in. And it's not the type of death sentence carried out by an impassive executor. He's essentially going to kill himself. He is dying from the inside out.
He mumbles something at the doctor, and suddenly he is on the street, a white piece of paper fisted and crumped in his hands. He's grateful it has the prescription written on it in
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For my January 2013 prompt screamprompts.deviantart.com/j…
I generally don't write in 1st person, if there's some tense switches, let me know; I caught what I could.
comments and critiques are welcome but not required -- i'll leave that up to you guys
9-28-13: thanks to everyone who collected/faved this today, i appreciate your support
For my January 2013 prompt screamprompts.deviantart.com/j…
I generally don't write in 1st person, if there's some tense switches, let me know; I caught what I could.
comments and critiques are welcome but not required -- i'll leave that up to you guys
9-28-13: thanks to everyone who collected/faved this today, i appreciate your support
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This is an amazing story! Are you going to add on? You should make a book. If you will add on, plz say so because i really would read it! thx