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Daily Deviation
August 9, 2014
Suggester's words: raspil takes a departure from her normal fare with My First Pet, the short story of a Godlet trying to claim his first planet.
Deviant also suggested by Naktarra.
Deviant also suggested by Naktarra.
Featured by neurotype-on-discord
Suggested by demonlight
Literature
Soul Fly
Uncle Levi and Auntie Gertrude and Katie didn’t miss Gramma. They didn’t even think about her until her Soul Fly Day came. Their flies were silver with big sparkly opal eyes, but Momma said the wood ones Grampa carved for us were just as good.
It was my first Soul Fly Day ever. Momma got me a new black dress and told me it was all right to cry. Katie’s dress had white ruffles and silver flies stitched into it. She pointed at my wood fly and called us poor.
There were so many people there was barely enough room for the shaman to get to Gramma. Everyone got real quiet so we could hear him say words I didn’t understand.
Literature
Faeriefire
We all hid when the faeries dueled.
You and I were in the closet, wishing to each other half-secretly among the motes that the duels could be rare as dragons, at least. Instead they were only rare as quarter-moons.
Ground liquifies, sometimes, during a duel. The stars brighten and fall faster, leaving holes in the ground and setting forests alight. The sun hides in a bird’s nest, they say.
We did not see when the damage was done. We were accustomed to avoiding to know even the names of those who fought. Our eyes were far from windows.
But duels always ended the day after they began, and we stepped
Literature
Plan B - Three Little Pigs
Kool-Aid,
Need help with wall.
Wolf
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Day 3
1000 words
unedited for the haters
this was the first time trying a combination of fantasy/Young Adult. don't hurt me, i'm new at this
update DD 8-9-14
It's a complete shock that an unedited story in a genre I've never written before got a Daily. I'm speechless. I am quite fond of this story, I think it's one of the "cutest" pieces I've written. I want to dedicate it to those who fear and avoid writing outside what they know. It can work if you make it work.
1000 words
unedited for the haters
this was the first time trying a combination of fantasy/Young Adult. don't hurt me, i'm new at this
update DD 8-9-14
It's a complete shock that an unedited story in a genre I've never written before got a Daily. I'm speechless. I am quite fond of this story, I think it's one of the "cutest" pieces I've written. I want to dedicate it to those who fear and avoid writing outside what they know. It can work if you make it work.
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reminds me of an another version of "GOD" growing up alternative version of "Earth"?
Co-creators and harmonizers of life in the universe the description could be more detailed
like explaining more about the environment the Godlet is inhabiting.
so on so forth
Keep it up and thanks for showing the haters i feel what you say.
Brill story keep it up and carry on with the exploring into different tangets of interest:+)
Co-creators and harmonizers of life in the universe the description could be more detailed
like explaining more about the environment the Godlet is inhabiting.
so on so forth
Keep it up and thanks for showing the haters i feel what you say.
Brill story keep it up and carry on with the exploring into different tangets of interest:+)