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Day 3
1000 words
unedited for the haters

this was the first time trying a combination of fantasy/Young Adult.  don't hurt me, i'm new at this

update DD 8-9-14
It's a complete shock that an unedited story in a genre I've never written before got a Daily.  I'm speechless.  I am quite fond of this story, I think it's one of the "cutest" pieces I've written.  I want to dedicate it to those who fear and avoid writing outside what they know.  It can work if you make it work.
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Daily Deviation

Given 2014-08-09
Suggester's words:  raspil takes a departure from her normal fare with My First Pet, the short story of a Godlet trying to claim his first planet.

Deviant also suggested by Naktarra.
( Suggested by demonlight and Featured by neurotype )
INDIJAZ Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2014
reminds me of an another version of "GOD" growing up alternative version of "Earth"?
Co-creators and harmonizers of life in the universe the description could be more detailed 
like explaining more about the environment the Godlet is inhabiting.
so on so forth
Keep it up and thanks for showing the haters i feel what you say.
Brill story keep it up and carry on with the exploring into different tangets of interest:+)
Solokeh-Krontos Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Interesting family social dynamics within a culture of gods, I like it.
Evertoseer Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This is different from anything I've read in a while. It's quite refreshing really. I enjoyed this :-)
ArynChris Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014
It's adorable. *chuckles*
KreepingSpawn Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Congrats on the DD!  :dummy:
LoserLibs Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Adorable Girl Anime Emoji (Heart Dance) [V6]  omg this is adorable, and not to mention unique. Good job :D and congrats on the DD!
DeniseCroy Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Oh my God. I never expected that sort of story from you. Which is totally a good thing. I really love the idea. Congrats ! 

It's probably what you intended, but it sounds like the diary of a teenager. 
Edges-to-Everything Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations! This is cute, clever and a very enjoyable story. :nod:
- Michael
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