I'll be blunt here: what was the purpose of the title? Also, eben though the character was decently defined, and the overall plot did have a beginning, a climax, and an ending, it wasn't... thorough.

What I feel is that the deliberate ending which was enforced in this prose could have been better used. Maybe a little explanation added that would show how she... say... recovered and then learnt from her experience in this scenario. Do you get what I mean? Make this a medium to explain her perseverence in learning from mistakes and improving on her chances (which was her motivation in the end). That could actually prove to be an ironic twist to the title.

With that said, I did like it. I just feel that you've deliberately ended this the way you have. I don't know why, though... oh well, food for thought anyway