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November 12, 2010
One of *raspil's greatest strengths as a writer is taking advantage of every detail in a story, and Wannabeatrix is a fine example of this, every moment and image functioning to strengthen and characterize the overall work.
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this was for the #GiveMeYourWords contest that i am very late in entering.

It was for "Antonyms" -- to take a favorite song and come up with five adjectives that describe the song and then come up with antonyms for them.

The song I chose was "LoveGame" by Lady Gaga.

The adjectives I chose: spontaneous, industrial, desire, forward and voyeur.

The antonyms I chose: premeditated, developing, aversion, reserved and participant.

--->>

craziness, another DD! I really liked writing this story and I'm very happy that it is being recognized. it didn't get much love when i first wrote it but i labored over it big time and am thankful for GB for giving it a nod. :heart:
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Wow, this must be the reason it got a DD! :3 A very well written story, indeed! I love the irony at the end. Bea may have her feather pillows, but they'll only serve to rest that pretty head of hers until her black eye fades.