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This is going to be for possible publication through my local writer's group. The guidelines: It's supposed to be a quest, 2000-4000 words set in Nevada.
The main thing that the speaker (Michael Hauge) at that group spoke of, like drove home harder than anything was the objective of every story, which is to elicit emotion. As much as I hate that word and how it has no meaning at this site anymore because new writers tend to think one-dimensionally about emotions, he's right. Of course, I call it something else: eliciting a visceral response. Same difference but I like the word "visceral".
So I am going to write an underdog story. I'm not sure if I've done that in the past, at least not as conscious of it as I am this time.
I'm thinking about another workshop before too long about loglines and how they can speed up the process of plotting and storytelling. I've found some good information about that at tumblr and want to put my thoughts to it and see what happens.
and Thug Notes at Youtube. good times.
watch this, learn something: youtu.be/JLJhTwAP1v0
The main thing that the speaker (Michael Hauge) at that group spoke of, like drove home harder than anything was the objective of every story, which is to elicit emotion. As much as I hate that word and how it has no meaning at this site anymore because new writers tend to think one-dimensionally about emotions, he's right. Of course, I call it something else: eliciting a visceral response. Same difference but I like the word "visceral".
So I am going to write an underdog story. I'm not sure if I've done that in the past, at least not as conscious of it as I am this time.
I'm thinking about another workshop before too long about loglines and how they can speed up the process of plotting and storytelling. I've found some good information about that at tumblr and want to put my thoughts to it and see what happens.
and Thug Notes at Youtube. good times.
watch this, learn something: youtu.be/JLJhTwAP1v0
updates
1. We raised a total of about $125 for the llama (my folks threw in the last $25), which has been purchased and will be sent to a family in need of one. Thanks you guys, mission accomplished. :-)
2. I have received no stories for the contest, which was not totally unexpected (Nano and holidays). So be it. The llama still happened.
3. That is all
up to 119.00 for llama fund
only about $30 to go before we hit the cost for the llama. that's only 10 more copies. this should be easy as pie. or cake... i know the lit community still likes that debate ;-)
CALL FOR CONTEST ENTRIES -- write a story and win a copy of the anthology :-)
we don't have much time left, let's spread the word that all proceeds from the sale of this book of stories from dA writers will go toward buying a llama for a family in need.. info in original journal --> We did it for REAL! + real actual llamas!! + b
i got another job so i guess i'll be around as much as i can for a minute
i know this breaks everyone's beating heart
i love the poor little babies i am leaving behind
apparently, june can't come fast enough for one girl at this site (i'm sure more than one, i am, after all, everything wrong with dA. talk about exhausting). if they only knew.
look, little sister.
sweetie darling sugar pie.
you've been here seven months. i know why you blocked me, it's okay. new writers don't like me. ever. because i tell them things they never want to hear. like
YOU HAVE TO DO THE FUCKING WORK AND IF YOU DON'T, YOU'RE LAZY.
i hope you try to get published someday because you will look back and realize i was the nicest person you ever met.
i hope to see you defend yourself in these comments and link me back to
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I'm terrible at writing my own loglines. But we did do something handy at VFS when writing coverage on other peoples' scripts -- in addition to the regular crit and analysis, we also wrote summaries and loglines of the other scripts and it's astounding how helpful that is both to the writer to help them figure out what the fuck they're writing about and as personal logline writing practice. Maybe something you could incorporate?
Sorry if that was jumbled, I'm having an insomnia night.
Sorry if that was jumbled, I'm having an insomnia night.